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The Haunted House

Amid the glacial hills of central Maine There stood forsaken, gray, an ancient farm, Which always filled us with a vague alarm. Atop the humpback ridge of a moraine, Abandoned now, for centuries it stood, Defying time, and ice, and hurricanes. Its windows now were yellowed, cloudy panes, Its weathered clapboards, bleached unpainted wood. We’d see its silhouette against the dusk: Its gambrel roof was reared against the skies With dormers like two staring, evil eyes— Unyielding in their aspect, heartless, brusque, Perhaps a touch of malice in their glare. And though untenanted for many years, It never failed to stimulate our fears, Because the house seemed gleefully aware. But was it haunted? So we all assumed. Yet still each May we’d watch as swifts would nest And use the eaves and dormers for their rest; And in its dooryard fragrant lilacs bloomed. February 16, 2019 Enclosed Rhyme Poetry Contest Emile Pinet, Sponsor

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Date: 3/6/2019 6:55:00 AM
I have read your enclosed rhyme work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara
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J P Marmaro
Date: 4/6/2019 11:55:00 PM
Thanks, Sara!
Date: 3/5/2019 6:52:00 PM
You make a great storyteller. Congratulations on your placement. Poetic hugs, Juliet.
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Date: 4/6/2019 11:56:00 PM
I appreciate your kind comment, Juliet! Thanks!
Date: 3/5/2019 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations JP! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Due to the exacting rhyme requirements of this form, this contest was very tough to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 2/16/2019 9:46:00 AM
Can it be haunted if lilacs bloom upon the doorstep? Great storytelling and flow to your poem... An enjoyable read..
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J P Marmaro
Date: 2/16/2019 10:04:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comments -- this was an actual house in Lagrange, Maine, which, from its architecture, dated from the late 1700s or very early 1800s.

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