The Gun 2

Should i have known this was gonna happen to us. They were gonna leave us... all i 
was tryna do was save us from this nothing world. NOTHING! now where am i? 

 

I shouldve just stayed back there and not have let you shoot me. I should have just 
froze to death. The sun is shining every day//. but for some reason it felt so far 
away.

 

I could have solved my problem bACK THERE in that nothing world...i could have told 
him i was sorry for breaking up his friendship and that i hope he understands that 
people make mistakes. Am i a person anymore? 

 

I could have....i could have gotten over him...no one stays together forever... 
because there is no such thing.

 

I ......didnt want to...fear took over me.. RAGE took over me! I WAS DONE FOR! that 
world ate me alive! I couldve changed but ITS TOO LATE!

 

where am i? Godd if you can hear me i ask that you forgive me. i Am not 
perfect.Dont leave me 

 

(whats that light in the distance? wait is that God? He is...wait is he shaking his 
head?) .....oh no=\

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/29/2011 5:51:00 PM
Very creative and devotional expressions, JaNece
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