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The Funeral

He sprinkled holy water In my Uncle Aaron’s grave. That isn’t how a rabbi Would most typically behave. But nondenominational’s The cemetery’s claim. Perhaps he wanted to appease The mourners who all came. The prayers were said, the dirt was tossed, The tears our grief’s release. Despite the circumstance, I hope My uncle is at peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/8/2018 12:36:00 PM
Ilene, I truly believe that once a person has passed, their thoughts do not concern such things a burial places. Still, it is remarkable that the rabbi used holy water because it matters to the living, such as yourself. Thank you for sharing this compelling poem. Well expressed! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/8/2018 12:11:00 PM
Interesting; if Adam was made of clay, isn't a bit late to be adding water to ashes? Sorry, I just never understood religion, but still admire your ability to express yourself! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/7/2018 7:46:00 PM
Interesting---without taking away from the sadness and gravity of Uncle Aaron's passing. (Almost feel as if I knew him, at this point). May you and your family know no more sorrow, and may you be comforted among the mourners in Zion and Jerusalem. ~ Only good news! ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/7/2018 4:16:00 PM
A nicely written sad poetic offering my friend.
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Date: 11/7/2018 4:16:00 PM
Well penned, Ilene. I'm sure your uncle is not worried about a thing at this point.
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