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Willie Winkie lived in a land of magic, in the region called Butterfly Haven; For Willie was a diminutive elf, like the violet blossoms, of purple fixation. Willie and his beloved wife, Elvira, lived highly organized, pleasant lives; For magic impels ways and customs to differ, like buds, as spring arrives. Everyone called Willie Winkie, 'Wee,' since most elves were notably bigger; But, he was Director of Dreams, scattering joys of plum night, with vigor. Violence was completely unheard of, inside their peace loving community, Of pretty, spotless, blooming streets-and children, well rested and healthy! Fair magenta clouds got lacy frills, as hours fidgeted, bearing fast friends. All fervidly danced as one, at dusk, to the forever friend tunes, of no end. Fascination was a trait of fragrant flowers, staring dewy-eyed at lemon sun; Until fast moving family arrived, with emerald fireflies, when day was done. Willie lived in the house of hydrangeas, in shades of pink, blue and cream; Crowding pretty at every door and pane, as stylish birds, of much esteem. Sparkling and litterless was their street, of sapphire sky and dusk surprise, Where the scandalous moon still glowed at noon, with stardust in her eyes. Neon nature knew how to lure neighbors, along neat streets, paved in gold, In noisy days of croaking frogs, and red butterflies, silken cocoons foretold. Baseball plants were playing games, and sundew plants drank out of doors, When 'devil's tooth' flora grinned wickedly, and 'black magic' drew applause. 'Hammer orchids' were handy all summer, in yellows, creams, and maroon; And witches' hair plants went uncombed, due to the blood on cherry moon! Elven children had broken curfew lately, based upon gossip, heard by Elvira. This agitated the Director, who called the Dream Patrol, in starlight vanilla. So, each evening the children were taken home, and the director took part, Indicating the value of his mission. The shamed kids, had a change of heart! For if the Director of Dreams, himself, had forgone rest, to insure their own; Then it must be a precious thing, like emerald nature, on her rubied throne! 'Wee Willie Winkie runs through the town, Upstairs and downstairs, in his nightgown; Rapping at the window, crying through the lock, “Are the children in their beds? Now it’s eight o’clock.'

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Date: 12/4/2024 9:23:00 AM
You are quite the storyteller, Evelyn, and again you have drawn inspiration from a famous nursery rhyme. well done. Was thi for a contest?
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/4/2024 5:32:00 PM
Thank you for your kind expressions, Andrea. This poem wasn't for a contest. Best of wishes. :)
Date: 11/26/2024 11:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun write/story. You must live on "Magic Street." Hahaha!!! Have a fun day as you write away.................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/26/2024 1:46:00 PM
Half the joy of magic is in believing. :D Thank you for the smiles, and I hope you thoroughly enjoy your day.
Date: 11/25/2024 4:07:00 AM
Dear evelyn, you always rhyme and write using colors and metaphors painting imagery in such an artistic manner always! And the ending there with those lines really gives it the lyrical touch that makes it even more engaging! A dreamy poem i must say, as you had so many different descriptive lines that made me stop and dream away! Pleasure always reading your work! Sending you light always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/25/2024 7:12:00 PM
Dear friend, thank you for the words of uplift that bring joy to my day. Your gracious compliments are so much appreciated. I hope your week is wonderful. :)
Date: 11/24/2024 3:18:00 PM
Another lovely story Evelyn enjoyed all the characters in this magical wonderful world of yours. Your imagination in Willie Winkie. Loved the flower affect in your story. Another wonderful creation of yours just wowing the reader in this classic tale of yours. Immensely fun to read. Thank you for sharing...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/24/2024 9:29:00 PM
I'm so pleased that you found this story to be immensely fun to read, my friend. Thank you for the delight of your very valued remarks.
Date: 11/23/2024 12:25:00 PM
Dear Evelyn, Willie Winkie is a delightful journey into a magical world! I loved your enchanting characters for they create a whimsical atmosphere that captivated me. it's truly a joy to read! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/23/2024 5:18:00 PM
My deepest thanks to you, my friend, Daniel. Your words warm my heart with joy. Best wishes for a wonderful hoiday season. :)
Date: 11/23/2024 11:49:00 AM
Evelyn. you're wonderful. Such a lively imagination, wonderful plants and great rhyme.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/23/2024 5:14:00 PM
Your remarks give me lots to smile about. Thank you very much.
Date: 11/23/2024 9:49:00 AM
- Magical place to live... in harmony with nature... where everyone is happy... bedtime at eight o'clock... red little cheeks with kind and sweet dreams... all woven together in pastel... love it, Evelyn :) - hugs
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Date: 11/23/2024 5:22:00 PM
I deeply appreciate the happy thoughts, Anne-Lise. Warmest holiday best wishes. hugs :)
Date: 11/22/2024 11:18:00 PM
delicious inspiration, director of dreams can help so many people and children, enjoyed your creative poem yann
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Date: 11/23/2024 9:44:00 AM
Thank you for your very valued remarks, dear Yann. :)
Date: 11/22/2024 5:44:00 PM
But, he was Director of Dreams, scattering joys of plum night, with vigor... Where the scandalous moon still glowed at noon, with stardust in her eyes…all the lovely colors and all :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/22/2024 9:23:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the pretty colors, Kim. Thank you so much for the happy thoughts. :)

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