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The Darkness Echos

The night draws down steel clouds and cold drizzly rain whilst under roof soothing slumber yet remain. I walk to darken gray rooms of my tomb in bleakness and despair, malignant womb. Kneeling in acceptance with mournful din my penance will never end for my sin. The outside evolves a prolonged unrest; while I ebb, lost upon my hollow breast. 2/2/2019

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Date: 2/11/2019 12:02:00 PM
Hauntingly dark couplets that chill the heart. Impressive verse, Eve
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Date: 2/7/2019 3:17:00 AM
- Eve, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2019 2:26:00 PM
Brilliant and morose write, Eve!:-) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/6/2019 1:53:00 PM
This poem is so sad, when a person feels so lost and just wants an end... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:55:00 PM
a very sad mood this evokes. Great working showing us the dark atmosphere of your poem.
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Date: 2/3/2019 11:04:00 AM
pensive in mood yet so meaningful as you swathe away the pain, eve... excellent piece; keep your chin up!..huggs
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Date: 2/3/2019 9:10:00 AM
Oh Eve, I feel this has a deeper message, of someone missing someone and is feeling so lonely and wants no part of this life.... :(
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Date: 2/3/2019 2:56:00 AM
A dark couplet Eve, well written. Tom.
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