That Toe-Tapping Feeling

Some ascribe it to rhythm
    others to rhyme
  The lines have a feeling
    fingers and toes keep the time

  Whatever the case
    be it poem or song
  That hand-clapping, toe-tapping feeling
    tells you ~ 'I belong!'

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Date: 6/11/2023 12:18:00 PM
I love this! It’s what real pietry is meter and good verse. Pangie cx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/11/2023 5:54:00 PM
Thanks for such a nice comment, P! ~ Real Poet, who does his best to write 'real poetry.' Cheers, gw
Date: 6/11/2023 4:53:00 AM
Oh, the rhythm, meter, and cadence of life....wait....I hear that distant drummer...keep tapping out the tune Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/11/2023 5:58:00 PM
That distant runner is Paul Revere ~ Lost his horse with no name
Date: 6/11/2023 2:00:00 AM
what a fun poem GW I will be dancing at classes 3 days this week - I deserve hand claps for that feat lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/11/2023 6:06:00 PM
OK Twinkle-toes. ~ Tu Left Feat
Date: 6/10/2023 11:21:00 PM
Reminds me of the old coke commercial. " I'd like to give the world a coke" your idea is better...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/11/2023 6:10:00 PM
That's because I'm 'a whole generation!' (Pepsi, 1980's).
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/11/2023 2:02:00 AM
I've got that tune in my head now thanks Michael lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/10/2023 9:44:00 PM
We will all get along When we sing a song Loud and clear For all the world to hear That will help to alleviate The situations we hate Gershons, song Titled 'I belong' Will sooth our souls And make us whole
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/10/2023 9:46:00 PM
Let's keep tapping our toes, fellow soles/souls! Smiles, Gershon
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