Talking Smack

*I've been called a 'shrew,' told I am self centered, petty, and a few other rather insulting and invective names, so here is my rebuke.


Who plays the straight man for the one known as 'Schmoe?'
It's the Jester who juggles where ever Schmoe tells him to go.
Then there's Mr. DoGoody who seeks the spotlight of fame,
reproaching PS poets by pointing his finger at them in shame.

Three fatuous figures who lie in wait for Poetry Soup blogs 
Croaking like three pompous bullfrogs in criticizing dialogues
Verbal abusers, slanderer of a nation, and he who prances
hoping to give Schmoe, his bro, the stage... the lackey dances. 

It's a tragic case of fools rushing in where wiser men never go
A disease suffered by the egos of DoGoody, Jester, and Schmoe
A threesome pretending they're Red Barons in control of awacs
but they're just three old wacky muggins,  Poetry Soup Quacks.

Ask a question and see what nonsense they will spew at you
Swearing their intent is righteous, and their cause is true blue,
but the more they protest, the deeper the holes they are digging.
A misguided clique always zagging when they should be zigging.

So if you bother to read what they write, just consider this...
the underlying meaning to their dribble shows what's amiss.
It's a game they play...one where they often make mistakes
Nuts have to be added to the batter while making a fruitcake

Now if you're thinking I'm just as guilty for some name calling,
I'm ready to be under attack with their whining and squalling.
I've already been accused by DoGoody of talking behind his back...
So here I am, you're all unblocked if you want to talk more smack.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolves Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Sadly the world is full of incompetent narcissists a.k.a egomaniacs with inferiority complexes. I've had to deal with them on other sites. But the best revenge is to ignore them... it eats their lunch and drives them insane... bwahahahaha write on dear poetess write on...
Capitano Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 2:22 AM
I'm not sure what all the in-fighting is about but there is no need for people to be rude or plain vicious - life's too short for that kind of BS. Never back down, Jenna, stand your ground.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 7:51 AM
Oh, my! This poetry slam is fuming funny real, Jenna. No sugar-coating your Truth. Keep speaking your mind, sista! Joy and peace always and forever.
Logan Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Hi, Freddie. There's no sense in trying to sugar-coat the truth about certain people who seek attention with such rude and disrespectful behavior towards others. Yet, they are the one who claim to be victimized. It would be funny if it were not the sad reality. Thanks for stopping by with your thoughts.
Alex Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 11:29 PM
Wow!
Logan Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 5:36 PM
Anyone looking for the abusive thread started by Keith is too late to read his latest insults to the poets who have commented. I'm immune to his spewing, but I'll not allow him or anyone to insult the kind hearted poets who respond to my poetry. I've removed his offensive name calling of me and others, but I have retained all of it in case anyone needs a reminder of how obnoxious and disrespectful he is. To Victor and Brother Jacob, since he would never think of apologizing for his rants, I'll say, "I'm sorry that his scornful tirade included you."
Logan Avatar
May 6, 2021 at 6:38 PM
I appreciate your thoughts, Jacob. I read what he wrote to you and about you...before he called me a 'spoiled brat.' If he wasn't such a hostile person he could almost be pitied, but that would be a waste of my concern.
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Whoa Jenna you are certainly taking no prisoners, will all the protagonists come to the showdown, I’m not sure for they may be spooked, is it a trap, of course not if they have nothing to hide, oh sorry did I not mention your poem is excellent, damn this European time Line, I hope I don’t miss anything, cheers David
Logan Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Thanks for returning, David. I guess they're not ready for show and tell. I'm glad you appreciated the poetry. ;)
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 5, 2021 at 12:00 AM
I awake at dawn and it’s a no show, I always believe peoples silence, speaks volumes about them, therefore one must assume your point and poem has surely been proven.
Leffanta Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 11:52 AM
When a man starts throwing dirt, you can be sure he is losing ground ....Aloha! Rico
Logan Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Hi, Rico. They can write what ever they choose. I know what they're doing, and I won't be intimidated.
Cunningham Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Ive known many good poets leave because of all the negativity on here, its time admin took a grip of the situation and dealt with it once and for all. Love your response Jenna, Tom
Logan Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Hi Tom. I'm not going anywhere. Thank you so much for the kind response to my lines.. Admin leaves us to fend for ourselves, so I did. Thanks for your input, Jan. i appreciate it.
Allison Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 1:09 PM
It will never stop Tom they just blog and comment to eachother about how innocent they are lol. Hope you are ok after the 2nd jab:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:52 AM
Jenna I'm saddened to hear of nasty comments you have received, but nothing surprises me on soup anymore, I had to laugh at them writing 'dribble' I wonder if it is on a level with my poop lol :-) Just ignore the morons they lead such sad lives to behave like kids, hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 9:06 AM
It's all poop to me, Jan. lol Sticks and stones when considering the source. They seem to think it's ok for them to throw them...real bravado...especially when they throw them at women.
Koplin Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:56 AM
I’m sorry you have to put up with this childish abuse Jenna. I’m proud of you for sticking up for yourself and writing from the heart. I feel sorry for any jerk that does it here. Gloves are off my friend
Koplin Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 10:15 AM
It’s amazing that grown men act like this. If they didn’t have a keyboard to hide behind they wouldn’t be so brazen.
Logan Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:30 AM
It's been ongoing for some time, as you know, Mark, and only serves to show what kind of people they really are.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:55 AM
Well said Jenna. Hit them hard. They are probably third rate poets.
Logan Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Thank you for your faithful support, Victor, and I'm laughing at your assessment.
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