Tactiles An Open Form

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NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

TACTILES

 blue
in
a
an arrested
 gaze

 slide
in
a
fused an
avalanche
 onto
 a bare
canvas
to
 erupt


then
to
burst out
&through
into
a
startling
 ravishing
melting
beyond beauty
 into
conceptual
 refinement
&
 shine
the
translucency
of
 colouration

an ability
to
decorate
the
 delicate things
with
a passion
for
the intensely
 tactile

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