Summer

in the sunshine a blackberry blossoms winter's summer pudding

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Cherilyn Fry

Date: 7/18/2008 12:28:00 PM

beautiful!

James Foulk

Date: 7/17/2008 11:04:00 AM

yes Brian I can see all of those blackberry's and the pudding they make. very good one.

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/17/2008 7:29:00 AM

Hello Brian - just up the road out by the river blackberries blossom by the thousands - your use of the form is perfect - be Blessed Brian

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/17/2008 6:43:00 AM

Yum for blackberries in any form. Have never had blackberry pudding though, must be a delight. Thanks for your thoughtful reply Brian. I am able to participate now. And thanks for the conkers explanation! Sounds like great fun. Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 7/17/2008 4:36:00 AM

Brian, great visuals xhere as I can remember my childhood and all the berry bushes and trees in my neighborhood. Fond times. Have a great day. Michael

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 7/17/2008 3:42:00 AM

LOVE the last line here, Brian...my Gran used to make the best blackberry jam, put that on sour dough bread - heaven! Loved this haiku, blessing B, and thanks for noticing my SB poetry, I'm there because of you! XO Kristin