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A raging river tenaciously floods Tannins and silts combine to dark blood A hut, just fifty metres, occupying their sight Two men, cold and wearied, stuck for the night An adventure all planned, lasting a week In the middle of nowhere with red deer to seek Twelve-hours of hiking, commencing that day Now trapped with some refuge a stone throw away. Cracking of boulders being pushed by the current Affirming the folly of crossing this torrent. Necessities shaping a cold camp till the dawn Just tattered old plastic, to use as an awn. Soft moss as a bed but soaking from rain Ferns as a pillow don’t cushion colds pain. Dark of the evening only adds to the pall Deaths favoured colour, as rain continues its fall Shivering endless; bodies fighting the shock Drops of clouds tears slowed to the tick of a clock. Moisture still falling, no hope for them now Prospects were mirrored by the dark of the hour Subtly the winds whispered breathe in their ear. Fight. Rekindling the flames to survive their harsh plight Packs full of food, swiftly emptied for fuel Bodies recharged in spite of the cool. Rain in the dark hours continued to pour Sounds from the river commenced to fair roar, First crack of dawn and they got up and away Wilderness wins this particular day. *Based on a true story however my companion and I were stuck in the elements for 2 days and nights. Another river flooded and blocked our exit.*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/1/2016 7:55:00 PM
Hi Mark, a rather harrowing experience to say the least. This is an excellent poem Mark, taking us along in your experience. Your words put us into the heart of the situation. Camping is never for the faint hearted my friend. The elements can change so quickly and danger always awaits. A well written write Mark. A seven and into my faves....Mike.
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Date: 4/1/2016 7:53:00 PM
Hi Mark, a rather harrowing experience to say the least. This is an excellent poem Mark, taking us along in your experience. Your words put us into the heart of the situation. Camping is never for the faint hearted my friend. The elements can change so quickly and danger always awaits. A well written write Mark. A seven and into my faves....Mike.
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Date: 9/1/2015 11:36:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations on your win.... SKAT
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Mark Woods
Date: 9/2/2015 2:32:00 AM
Thank you Skat, I appreciate you popping in. : )
Date: 9/1/2015 12:42:00 AM
Very wonderful write Mark, Congrats on fabulous win!
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Date: 9/1/2015 1:17:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and your best wishes. You truly are one of the most terrific treasures here at the soup. : )
Date: 8/31/2015 10:11:00 PM
Exciting write ,the wilderness has always won out . Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/1/2015 1:14:00 AM
Cheers Eve. "Gotta" love nature sometimes.
Date: 8/31/2015 4:14:00 PM
Wow......a true story, and quite an adventure for sure !! Several members in my family are avid back-packers, and have had some pretty harrowing tales, one getting trapped in a canyon near Zion, in a flash flood, and had to sit on a ledge overnight until the waters receded ! I'm a camper, but these things are the extreme !! Great poem!!
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Mark Woods
Date: 8/31/2015 6:02:00 PM
Here in New Zealand our back country can have such changeable weather. I have had a lot of scary experiences but the rugged beauty always draws me back. On this occasion we were just damn lucky that we had a positive outcome. It could've easily been a different matter.
Date: 8/31/2015 3:46:00 PM
a harrowing true nature tale! I am happy to see your poem here on this winner list. You have won a contest with a judge who is very selective. I was amazed to see myself on the list as well. BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 8/31/2015 5:57:00 PM
Cheers Andrea. I haven't had a chance to pop into your poem yet but will tonight. As a fledgling poet learning the craft I do look up to your work and that of all of the other fine writers here at the soup. Your encouragement means a lot. Hugs xxx
Date: 8/31/2015 12:14:00 PM
What an incredible true story mark - i was riveted from start to finish many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/31/2015 2:07:00 PM
Cheers Jan. A nice surprise to wake up to this morning.
Date: 8/26/2015 1:50:00 AM
G'day Mark... enjoyed reading about this predicament; went through the same thing with storms in the outback. Stuck for days until the road dried out. Your poem has a good flow to it - Lindsay
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Date: 8/26/2015 2:42:00 AM
Cheers Lindsay. Not much fun as you have obviously learnt. Bloody NZ weather buggers up a lot of good plans. I thought I could pick a bit of a rural experience in your poems.

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