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Speaking of 'The End'

Horse Pills, Tablets, Liquid Drops He’s overmedicated Super-aggravated When will all of this stop ~ when his ‘back-door-trucks’ pop ‘You asked for it!’ ~ You got it!

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Date: 4/4/2025 6:46:00 PM
Thats the Rockerfeller way medicate you into Zombiesm. Lets treat your illness with drugs instead of finding the whys and fixing and getting you off these drugs that their side affects do more harm than the illness you have. Avoid the Dr like the Bubonic plague Holistic is the way and eating right is the solution me thinks... For what that is worth my friend...
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Date: 4/2/2025 5:18:00 PM
Not Toyota. I think my TBI prevents clarity with this one, though I suspect a nasty back end upset? Did I get that right? Because it's yours, I know the trouble is me. Because it's yours, I know it's good. I have to be right, 'speaking of the end', the implication - I got it. Just to share, Gershon, there are so many (not all) free verse poems that I simply do not get, and get dizzy trying to comprehend. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/4/2025 12:48:00 PM
Sorry, I can't seem to place you???, or understand your meaning, seems u might be self-slamming? If I remember correctly, that's not something I'd like a friend to do. But if they be humble lines as spoken from humility, it seems such sits just fine with me. (i've too much time on my hands, and i love it.)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2025 9:54:00 PM
Gee. Because it's mine, you know it's good? Hmm. TBI has affected you, I guess... I myself set mediocrity as a goal; sometimes I reach it. ~ gw
Date: 4/2/2025 10:54:00 AM
He’s overmedicated Super-aggravated…sounds like my uncle from years ago. When the hospital went over his medicines they weeded some out…crrrazy doctors!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2025 9:55:00 PM
'Weeded out' sounds like the right Rx for a lot of medications. Stay sane, gw

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