Spa day

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Being published in BOTTLE ROCKETS Haiku Senryu & Short Verse #40 2018

spa day
dad comes home
to a brunette



Published in Bottle Rockets #40 2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2018 9:42:00 AM

Hmmm, doesn't she have blonde hair like Doris Day?? Ok, I think I get it now!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2018 2:31:00 PM

LOL - same lady indeed. Thanks for your delightful visit and comment, Andrea.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/19/2018 9:06:00 PM

Wonderful! Can just picture it! … and the look on Dad's face as well. Well-done, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/19/2018 10:04:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. LOL