Some Feet

Some feet are bare. Some wear shoes. That's news.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/28/2025 4:27:00 PM

a touch of humor in human reality.. funny stuff, David. enjoy your evening, Sara

David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 6:31:00 PM

Thanks Sara - true!

Anne Winter

Date: 7/28/2025 4:28:00 AM

And that's life! Bittersweet and ridiculous!

David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 6:30:00 PM

Yup!

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/28/2025 12:57:00 AM

As poetry moves, this one is fairly funny. This is life as it really is! I enjoy the relaxed vibe here.

David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 6:30:00 PM

Thanks, Sotto Poet - I write like that a lot - can't seem to break out of that pattern.

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 7/27/2025 9:44:00 PM

The stark realities of life!

David Crandall
Date: 7/29/2025 6:29:00 PM

Yup!