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Snatched and grabbed, reefed off me horse, Just crossed over the watercourse, Big white light it came and got, Zapped me, jerked me up aloft, A bloody flying saucer. Saw the circle spinning disk, With panels from one did whisk, Beam of light had done the job, In me pocket, thirty bob? Darkness came within my head, Aliens, bug eyed did me force, Anger burned hot instead, Tucker had, no bloody sauce? New planet appeared with a jolt , Purple haze was a taking holdt Pink of sky with glass buildings clear, An orange sun was setting here, Bugeye came and led me in, To the glassy citadel, Hover beds without support, Lifted up no bed clothes sport, A specimen in their jar, Often watched and fed bizarre, Jabbering bugs saw something rare, Aussie drongo with whiskers there.
Not Just Any Sunset Sponsored by: Paula Swanson

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Date: 8/13/2011 9:32:00 PM
best of luck in the contest Don, this is great....a really fun read!!!!!!smiles....chiquita
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Date: 8/13/2011 6:07:00 PM
OUTRAGEOUS fun Mate lol....I love it...good luck on contes...Good on you Don I saY!!!!!!!!!........with love....old Jack
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Date: 8/13/2011 4:32:00 PM
You are a genius of the pen, my friend! I read it til the end, my comment does depend, on whether its grand!! It is a grand poem, gratz on the incredible write!!
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:16:00 PM
hahaha, sounds like you've been there, good one, best of luck in the contest Don
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Date: 8/13/2011 1:03:00 PM
Nice and well written! Goodluck in the contest,Don
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Don Johnson
Date: 8/13/2011 9:06:00 PM
thanks mate
Date: 8/13/2011 12:05:00 PM
"pink of sky.." absolutely not just any sunset, don.... well- done with witty jabs! winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Don Johnson
Date: 8/13/2011 9:05:00 PM
didnt work last time on your site.... motion movents in a curry, in an awful bloody hurry, splatter splatter only fair, double barrell still a coming, still no bloody paper there.

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