Skating After Dark

black wool is the night
the ice goes on forever
the moon is itself
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Mccann Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 2:03 PM
I still get the body memories of that ease and flow, though I was never really good, just having fun. Almost fell through myself! Big lake, big crack across the entire middle, dark night, but I saw it just in time! I'm glad you just got wet! Elizabeth
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March 23, 2023 at 8:38 AM
When a teenager of 6 years I went night skating on a small pond and fell through the ice. Fortunately the pond's depth where I fell through was no more than two feet. BTW I use to be a figure skater in my twenties, my favorite sport. At 85 now I'm grateful to be walking, never mind skating. / Maurice
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March 18, 2023 at 9:11 AM
Few words with much said. The wonderful night, the ice, the moon, oh my... Have a blessed day........................
Mccann Avatar
March 18, 2023 at 3:00 PM
It was magical. Paula. It still feels a little unearthly to me. Thank you. Your remarks are a wonderful help. Elizabeth
Tellaferro Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 7:14 PM
Nice! Love the feeling it is evokes, walking after sunset on a winters day, coming home. Wanting warmth… Love it, a simple image, that evoke many memories. Thanks
Mccann Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 12:56 AM
Thanks so much! Poetry to me IS feeling. Elizabeth
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January 19, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Elizabeth, your penning instant a blessed presence to convey good tidings--satisfaction, Aloha William
Mccann Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 12:57 AM
Lovely, Hilo! I am touched. Elizabeth
Ray Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 3:48 PM
such a lovely apercu.....and the vision held in the magic of the moon....loved it
Mccann Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 12:58 AM
Exactly, Timothy! And thank you for the apercu; I had forgot that word! Elizabeth
Kendrick Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 2:37 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. I am sure a beautiful scene but very dangerous one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Mccann Avatar
January 12, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Thank you, Sara! Yes, there was some doubt about the thickness of the ice in the middle! (Good thinig- it was okay!) Elizabeth
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Excellent imagery!
Mccann Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 11:39 PM
Thank you, Andrea1 So glad to have your comment. Elizabeth
Buehler Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 7:44 PM
I love poems like this, which allow me to see a beautiful scene quite clearly. Evelyn :)
Mccann Avatar
January 11, 2023 at 11:41 PM
I love it when our visuals meet! A spaecial way of bbeing in touch. Elizabeth
Mccann Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 11:28 PM
I always love hearing from you, Gersh! Elizabeth
Wolf Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 7:47 PM
And I enjoy your every post, Elizabeth. Thank you!
Wolf Avatar
January 7, 2023 at 8:32 PM
Perfection in a snapshot, Elizabeth. Haiku as it's meant to be! A pleasure to read. Thanks!
Conn Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Is the moon not the skater here?
Mccann Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 1:43 PM
I like that idea, Chris! Nice image. Elizabeth
Cunningham Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 3:54 AM
I can just see the ice reflecting in the moonlight. Hope your new year is off to a good start Elizabeth. Tom
Mccann Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 1:45 PM
So happy to hear from you, Tom! Yes, the ice glowed in the moonlight. Have a good new year. Mine has begun quite well. Elizabeth
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January 6, 2023 at 2:20 AM
I can almost feel her skating towards the moon. Amazing picture.
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January 6, 2023 at 3:01 AM
Hope you'll like my last effort.
Mccann Avatar
January 6, 2023 at 2:49 AM
You're a wonderful reader, Victor! I can always count on your tuning in to the subtleties! Elizabeth
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