Sijo

a ring of bamboo sticks
a cobweb of the sun
my girl is stepping up

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a rill bubbling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/23/2011 7:48:00 AM
A nice thought well expressed with images, Bozhidar. Seen on PS after a long time. I hope everything is fine.
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Date: 2/23/2011 12:16:00 AM
Very nice!Enjoyed-----kashinath
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:39:00 PM
Cute one!
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