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boot cracked crème brûlée of snow — ninja stars 12/28/2021 Modern Haiku Sponsor: Chetta Achara

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Date: 1/5/2022 1:46:00 PM
Returning with Congratulations, Kim. Your original poem merited to be highlighted. Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2022 6:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul!
Date: 1/4/2022 2:07:00 PM
Wonderful images - "creme brulee of snow" is amazing! Congratulations on your win. Happy New Year my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2022 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, Sam! I love crème brûlée!
Date: 1/4/2022 8:34:00 AM
Wow Kim! I really love your haiku. The metaphor of “crème brûlée of snow —“ is brilliant! Congratulations on your win! New year blessings my friend. xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/4/2022 2:27:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 1/2/2022 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your creative write. Have a blessed day with your win..............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2022 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Paula!
Date: 1/1/2022 12:51:00 PM
- Congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2022 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise!
Date: 1/1/2022 9:37:00 AM
ninja - Great! Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2022 8:51:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj!
Date: 1/1/2022 7:24:00 AM
Well done! Congratulations.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2022 8:54:00 AM
Thanks, Chetta! Enjoyed! I was just visiting with my 11 year old grandson. This was experienced. I told him I wrote a poem about it. Minnesota the land of powder snow and ice.
Date: 12/31/2021 10:13:00 PM
Clever haiku Kim. Happy New Year.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2022 8:54:00 AM
Thanks, Harry!
Date: 12/31/2021 2:15:00 PM
- This was creative ... well done ... best wishes in the contest, Kim :) - I wish you and your family a happy new year 2022 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/2/2022 8:57:00 AM
Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2021 5:21:00 AM
I wish I had thought of this line "crème brûlée of snow —" Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thanks so much!
Date: 12/30/2021 4:44:00 PM
Hi Kim, a chilling Haiku indeed! Very clever! Happy New Year, Paulette
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/31/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you, Paulette! Happy New Year!
Date: 12/29/2021 11:06:00 AM
very modern KU, Kim. Love the snow image. Gotta think fast on this one myself!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2021 3:04:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/29/2021 10:39:00 AM
A thumbs up for originality, Kim! _ Best regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2021 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 12/29/2021 9:05:00 AM
Great Haiku, Kim. Creative and beautiful metaphors. Happy New Year, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2021 3:04:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 12/29/2021 6:03:00 AM
Very interesting haiku with "chilly" imagery!!! Happy New Year Kim xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2021 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, Mike! It is -9 this morning, where I am visiting!
Date: 12/29/2021 4:33:00 AM
Creative work. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. I enjoyed reading it this morning. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2021 7:22:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 12/29/2021 12:27:00 AM
Many images in this haiku. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2021 7:21:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!

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