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senryu

ghosts of my dreams linger as a truck rumbles through the alley on its morning rounds

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Date: 9/30/2024 6:06:00 AM
delightful senryu ~
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Date: 8/3/2024 1:21:00 AM
Great imaginative haiku.
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Date: 7/29/2024 7:57:00 PM
Interesting, Mike... Without the truck rumbling, the ghosts might have crawled right under the sheets with you!!
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Date: 7/26/2024 10:19:00 PM
Cool senryu Mike. I don't think I see you do these very often
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Date: 7/25/2024 11:22:00 PM
It's an excellent way to see two pictures in only a few words. Your senyru takes me on a journey.
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