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Saturated In Autumn's Romance

h e s i t a t e before leaving, my beloved... tarry with me to the pebbled reverie- wait for me under the moonlit autumn night, and I shall love you once again- I shall find repose when we reach love's height, for our romance shall never end pause before p a r t i n g, my sweet... share with me all the love you see- bring me a delicate CRIMSON blade- reminding me of our autumn m e m o r i e s made vows sworn under a tangerine sunset's view... FOR I CANNOT UNLOVE YOU Contest: 1 -12 lines ONLY A Poem That Did NOT Receive A Ribbon Placement 1-3 Rick Parise Written: April 29, 2019 Judged 5-4-19 Original contest: Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry Contest NA

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/21/2020 6:20:00 PM

Hello LuLoo, so romantic. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/5/2019 8:55:00 AM

Wow - awesome poem, Lu Loo. A FAVE for me. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/30/2019 3:35:00 PM

WOW! This was N/A? Why? Such a great poem, Laura:-) Glad it to see it get the kudos it deserves!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/30/2019 7:53:00 AM

BIG CONGRATS to win top. Love.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/30/2019 12:12:00 AM

Laura congrats on your great and well deserved win!;)

Lu Loo
Date: 8/30/2019 6:23:00 AM

thank you lovely Brenda :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/29/2019 10:40:00 PM

I know I commented on this lovely poem but I do not see my comment. Congratulations on winning a trophy for this beauty Luloo! So well deserved! : ) xxoo

Lu Loo
Date: 8/30/2019 6:22:00 AM

So that's really intense and strange Connie you said that because I swore I had a ton more comments. I know I did not win in the contest but I remember more comments. I thought I was going crazy! I will have to inquire, thank you for the heads up! I swear I would NEVER delete your comments. I don't do that anyways. Thanks sweet lady :)-luloo

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/29/2019 8:24:00 PM

Liking the layout and beautifully penned —a righteous win — congratulations indeed ~ Aloha William

Lu Loo
Date: 8/30/2019 6:20:00 AM

many thank William :)-luloo

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/29/2019 8:04:00 PM

wow...i am in awe of this gorgeous poem...i so wish i could write of love like this...such a talented write and worthy of your win...congrats my friend :) hugs

Lu Loo
Date: 8/30/2019 6:20:00 AM

oh don't be so silly...you hold a true gift, thank you :)-luloo