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Sailors Warning

sailor’s warning

the blood orange sky
squeezed into the water’s depth
— rising for breakfast

6/1/2018

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/3/2018 9:15:00 PM

What an entrancing scene you painted with this awesome haiku! Love it! Hugs. Pandita

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2018 9:46:00 PM

Thanks so much, Pandita!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/2/2018 5:54:00 AM

Witty and so fitting dearest, Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2018 6:22:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/1/2018 9:22:00 PM

Breathtaking imagery and clever play on words, Kim! Excellent! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2018 9:54:00 PM

Thank you, Susan!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/1/2018 9:19:00 AM

Clever and excellent imagery.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thanks, Richard!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 6/1/2018 9:14:00 AM

Wow....

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thanks, Rajat!

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/1/2018 9:06:00 AM

Time to eat...Good imagery...All the best Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/1/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thanks, Arturo!