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tears freely flowing waterfall of emotions pooling my sorrow 8th January 2015

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Darren White

Date: 10/7/2016 5:35:00 AM

This is lovely Jan, all these 'watery' things you managed to get into the few lines.

Julia Ward

Date: 3/18/2015 3:30:00 AM

Nicely done, Jan. Hugs, Julia, xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/18/2015 4:28:00 AM

Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan x

Funom Makama

Date: 1/14/2015 12:57:00 PM

This is so emphatic, beautiful and lovely... Thanks for the excellent share... Once again, happy and a prosperous 2015!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/14/2015 1:14:00 PM

Thanks so much Funom:-) Hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/13/2015 12:30:00 PM

deeply touching pen jan beautifully painted sending you a smile bless you pal

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2015 2:01:00 PM

Thanks Liam I wasn't sad when I wrote this but I have to go where my pen takes me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Fayaz Bhat

Date: 1/12/2015 9:38:00 PM

Touching! Wish you a happy life ahead, Jan. Hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2015 1:59:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comment Fayaz:-) hugs Jan xx

Daver Austin

Date: 1/11/2015 9:41:00 AM

Wet and wonderful. Love, daver

Jan Allison
Date: 1/11/2015 9:45:00 AM

I love that clever comment thanks Daver:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 1/10/2015 4:00:00 PM

Lovely and touching, Jan. I love it, sadness apart; glad to read that you are much happier in yourself. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2015 4:30:00 PM

Bit like a yoyo with emotions Paul - Been to a friend's wife's memorial service today it was such an uplifitng service :-) and have a memorial service for the 2 boys next Friday - I have written 2 poems for it hope I can hold myself together to read them:-) Hugs jan xx

Sandip Goswami

Date: 1/10/2015 2:32:00 PM

Super thoughts. I loved your real magic. Best to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2015 2:33:00 PM

Thanks so much Sandip:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2015 10:56:00 PM

love that line: pooling my sorrow! Great pic to go with it, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/10/2015 4:07:00 AM

Thanks so much Andrea - Vienna has created a follow up rhyme which she has added on her page as a collaboration:-) hugs jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/9/2015 3:22:00 PM

a most heartfelt,sensitive work, jan... I can feel the nostalgia.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2015 3:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Nette I do appreciate your comment:-) Hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/9/2015 3:08:00 PM

Your feelings come through strong and straight from the heart where most good poetry is born. Emile

Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2015 3:09:00 PM

Thanks so much Emilie:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 1/9/2015 1:43:00 PM

This poem is sweet even in sadness

Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2015 1:45:00 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Etienne:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/9/2015 11:20:00 AM

Another excellent write my dear friend!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2015 1:41:00 PM

Thanks as ever for your love and support Armand:-) Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/9/2015 10:36:00 AM

Hope tears of joy will follow and the waterfalls would start laughing! Do not despair for so much love is around you, dear Jan! Hope to... see you! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 1/9/2015 10:49:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios I wasn't feeling sad when i wrote this but I have to go where my muse takes me I just had the idea of a crying waterfall:-) Hugs Jan xx