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Rhyming Wave Poetry - Moonless Night

How far I've walked this moonless night, this moonless, moonless, moonless, night. My true love too long out of sight. My true feelings heartfelt Near fatal wound, my heart was dealt, my heart was, heart was, heart was dealt. I feel now like a salmon kelt. I feel my way by touch. Perfume, she's near, now fearing much, I'm fearing, fearing, fearing much! Every bough, every branch I clutch. Ever closer, so near. I hear it is her singing clear, oh, singing, singing, singing clear. She sings my name, our love so dear. She sings darkness to light! How far I've walked this moonless night. She sings darkness to light! © Mick E Talbot 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2018 5:47:00 PM

I'm not good at deciphering things like you showed at the top; however, the poem itself is really nice. I love that rhyme pattern.

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/15/2018 10:16:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea, Please check your Soup mail, thanks again. Mick

Charles Messina

Date: 5/15/2018 11:08:00 AM

Thanks for sending me in this direction, Mick, I have learned so many different styles of poetry that I never knew existed, in just the short time here on PS. eventually, I will try my hand at them all. The lord only knows how they will appear (lol) Enjoyed this write as much as your other one. Well Done...Charlie

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/15/2018 10:47:00 PM

Your most welcome Charles, if you do read this you'll note I've added a text describing the format, love to read one of yours ;-) Mick

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/15/2018 2:08:00 AM

Well written Mick, is this a form you've created. Tom.

Mick Talbot
Date: 5/15/2018 9:15:00 AM

Thanks, tom, no not my invention, please check the link out for more information. Mick http://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/rhyming-wave/