Reliance

I am a hatchling Who hardly knows a thing, I don't have much of a past, The world is wide and vast, I don't know what to do In my life that's bran-new, I need someone to lead me To where I should go and be. I am a hatchling, Warmth is essential in the night; Soon I'll be a fledgling Once I've grown feathers for flight, I don't know what to do In my life that's bran-new I need someone to teach me How to sing and fly free. I used to live inside a shell Now I'm fresh out of the egg; I'm a chick coming of age, I won't be trapped in a cage. I now know what to do I'm soaring in skies of blue, I have someone with me Two of us perched in a tree.

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Tom Woody

Date: 7/2/2025 5:05:00 AM

Having a close companion to be there for us when we need them can make all the difference. Chirp chirp. Hey welcome to PS!

Riley Ryleigh
Date: 7/4/2025 10:29:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. :-)

Danny Derden

Date: 6/30/2025 3:49:00 PM

This is such a sweet, hopeful poem! You beautifully capture the journey from vulnerability to confident flight, and the comfort of finding a guiding presence.

Riley Ryleigh
Date: 7/1/2025 12:55:00 PM

Thank you, for your kind comment. I was thrilled to read it. :-)