Red Sunset

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Remember the red setting sun
Like a sizzling fireball 
Slowly it decended away
In the west red did sprawl

Sharing sunset with only you
Beauty beheld enthralled
Our love and excitement combined
Wish those could reinstall  

Written Friday July 13, 2012
Entry into Top Five Sunsets
Sponsor: Francine Roberts

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2012 10:50:00 AM

Happy weekend to you Sara. I enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 7/14/2012 9:29:00 AM

A splendid poem, Sara, enjoyed! Jag

Karen Croft

Date: 7/13/2012 5:41:00 PM

thank you for your comments. good luck in francine's contest!

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2012 2:25:00 PM

Another beauty, Sara - Francine will love it, I'm sure.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/13/2012 1:09:00 PM

The color of red thrives greatly throughout your illustrious write my friend! I love your sunset, its beautiful, and you describe it so wondrously! What a brilliant poem, Sara! Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2012 12:41:00 PM

awhh, this charms me so, sara... well crafted piece with lines that captivate.. love lights your heart!..)huggs!