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Recollections From the Golden Cree I

I know of a river of more than average 
Sorts...
Meandering, when not dallying to maunder,
Between many differing contours 
And unruly contorts;
Where a privileged youth once
Happily sought -
Pursuing about his passions
In the traditional methods 
By which his better elders
Did most insist he was thereby taught.
Reinforced throughout with an almost
Religious zeal;
Enabled with spliced cane rod
Completed by ratchet-and-pawl type reel:
Whereon was wound the silken line;
About his slender frame hung
A wicker creel -
Contained therein beer and victuals
For a hearty meal!

Glad all the day long was he 
To present his barbed lure, 
Which, seldom, if ever, came to nought,
Within the purest sporting etiquettes,
That, loaded with conventional insistence,
Were so obligingly fraught;
And without transgression of strictest
Piscatorial code -
Perish the blinking thought!!
Thus, whereby to ensure, his wily quarry
Were gamefully hooked, played,
And lawfully caught.

June lit days skipped like lambs across
Her sheep cropped lawns;
Far distant out of sight Skylarks 
Singing trilly inside blue dusks and above
Thinning strands of wispy-pink dawns.
The whauping Curlew warbled when stalling
In drifting flight;
Burbling pied Oyster-Catchers,
Resplendent in orange gaiters, 
Piping vociferously along corridors 
Of shortest bat-flittering night...

And high up buffeted by the sharp
Breath of the bare escarpment,
Where soon the all-enveloping northern
Snows 
Will cover like an old maids shawl,
The red beaked Chough and 
Double white striped Meadow pipit, 
Fluttering above hidden creases,
Pause to quickly fall...
Into folds of Vested garments:
Imperial purples and rich magentas
Thrown as if discarded upon an 
Emperors mosaic floor;
Lavish carpets of Royal claret
Rolled out across the deeply-brimming 
Horizons of the wine-red moor.

For how well I can still bring to mind 
That lingering warmth
Of temperate Octobers sprinkled haze;
Loitering aimlessly to slowly dissipate 
And idly laze
Beneath the smouldering hills...
Whose majestic heathers torched and
Set alight,
Now unrestrained, so fiercely blazed!
Soon the antlered sounds of pointed bone 
Will clash furiously together, here, on this 
The Rut's inflamed stage;
Whilst over it all -
Muted bellows,  resonating, as enraged 
Rags engage desperately in their deadly 
Brawl!

Following inside the rutted lane,
Busy with the grey flutter of the 
Wheatears wings,
Besides seasonal disrepair 
Often to be found many a fellow
Employed for a variety of thankless sins;
Who, in abject despair, found good reasons 
To ruefully atone...
When patching up the openings of
Inexplicable holes
Fashioned from toppled piles of lichen 
Spotted stone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/19/2017 11:54:00 AM
Amazing!!!!!!
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John Fleming
Date: 8/20/2017 7:11:00 AM
Thanks, Patricia! Like many more of my poems needs a bit of editing...get around to it one day soon. All the very best - Cheers! :) john
Date: 6/5/2016 8:41:00 AM
Wonderful imagery in this write John. Great story telling.
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John Fleming
Date: 6/6/2016 10:51:00 AM
Hello, James. How very nice to make your acquaintance - Proud I am to be sure! Many thanks for popping in...and commenting - Always much appreciated! My best regards. :) john
Date: 5/28/2016 3:45:00 PM
I adore the vocabulary and a style of story telling that has me captured in his journey. You cause us to see through your eyes. Your snapshot pix are so lovely and I think I'd like to see this fishing hole! I love the suggested metaphor and OF COURSE the imagery. A7.
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Date: 5/28/2016 5:42:00 PM
It is still as it was, Edlynn...Beautiful and unspoilt! There is no country in the world more scenic than Scotland - August through September...Simply breathtaking! Scotland has some of the largest areas of heather moorland anywhere in the world...Over 5 million acres. My very best regards, Edlynn...And my warmest wishes. :) john
Date: 5/14/2016 4:04:00 PM
You write with such exuberant abandonment in this charming continuing poem John. Lines like: "June lit days skipped like lambs across Her sheep cropped lawns; Far distant out of sight Skylarks Sang trilly inside blue dusks and above Thin strands of wispy-pink dawns." contain such amazing imagery. I love reading your poetry. #7 Cheers, Connie ; )
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John Fleming
Date: 5/15/2016 7:18:00 AM
Hi, Connie. So very nice for me to see you here putting in an appearance again...Nobody is more dear to me on this or any other site. I am glad you quoted those two lines (most definitely my favourite lines in this poem) I have now revamped them both slightly, I think they now read even better than before. Many thanks, Connie, you will always be most welcome here at any time. Your friend always! :) john
Date: 3/18/2016 8:27:00 PM
Wow! The abundance of praises... That adorn most of your other poems... Is proof enough of your poetic mastery... Of words, thoughts and impressions.. It is educational and so refreshing... Upon taking time to read and reread your writings! Congrats!
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Date: 3/19/2016 7:38:00 AM
Hello again, Keng. Allow me to say how nice it is to make your acquaintance! Thank you for finding the time to visit and comment on my poetry - It is very much appreciated! Your friend. :) john

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