Reassess

Highways measure longer now
People garden less
Walking not behind a plow
Concepts' wavelengths reasses

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/31/2013 11:13:00 PM

This is a cleverly written poem. Makes the reader think of how much society and life has changed. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Poetry Dan poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/6/2013 2:02:00 PM

Sara, much requirement here... nice little rhyming poem... xox~ Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2013 7:44:00 AM

- Less to do ... but we have "never time" - well written Sara! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2013 9:56:00 PM

Yep, it's the sign of the times. I never liked gardening anyway, hahaha. My daughter kind of likes it though!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/3/2013 8:16:00 PM

We all have different thoughts and ideas on what we will do with our lives now that things are more advanced! Unfortunately some things get neglected but there are other things that become more specialized! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, such a wonderfully written poem, Great Work!!

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/3/2013 1:50:00 PM

And they call this progress.......I would think it is not! Lovely poem!