Raindrops

Down my umbrella ~the raindrops slid down dripping~ into wide waters

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/7/2023 4:07:00 AM

Excellent Haiku. Some places are seeing some flooding this year so I can imagine this one from what I am seeing on the news/weather. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with a nice comment. Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/7/2023 4:19:00 AM

Glad you like it. Thank you so much. I will often pass by your site to enjoy your poetry. Today here it's better to keep under a big hat or home. Extremely hot. Have a nice day.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/30/2023 10:34:00 PM

Awesome, Maria:)

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/31/2023 1:06:00 AM

Thank you so much, Joanna

Tom Woody

Date: 7/30/2023 4:56:00 PM

Mine has a hole in it. Sigh. Nice haiku

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 7/30/2023 5:01:00 PM

Thank you Tom