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Rain Frogs

Twelve tree frogs sing in loud chorus on this damp, foggy morn Their vocal would break the sound barrier By it nature is torn Fog caresses the valley Settles loosely on trees Exaggerates the silhouettes Moistens all the leaves The frogs have removed the silence Their din walks on nerves They need another residence Where they won't be heard Ship them to another planet Box them up in damp wrap Let them start a new settlement Send them, get them trapped My prayer for rain was answered This morn is nice and cool The frogs loved it also, singing To God their thanks refueled For a moment I was ungrateful The constant din distrubed Now I am accepting of the sound Let them sing unpreturbed The tree frogs or rain frogs came out in wild excitement last night following the rain.. Sponsor: Elly Wouterse Contest: A Positive Poem Written: Tuesday, June 24, 2014

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Date: 6/30/2014 8:44:00 PM
I love this fine write my friend! As a young boy I loved frogs and used to catch them just to look close at them. Bullfrogs were my favorites.. I think this will do very well in the contest!!
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Date: 6/25/2014 4:46:00 PM
awww, yes, let them join a frog choir and sing their little hearts out, as we say. Love this thoughtful write, my friend
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Date: 6/24/2014 11:13:00 PM
Dear Sara, Those tree frogs can be pretty loud, eh? It's the crickets that create a racket here. I love the poems you write about the sights and sounds you find in your backyard. This gem goes to my favorites. I've always loved frogs. :D Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/24/2014 5:26:00 PM
Sara, we are having frog season down here... I don't mind the sound.... Unless the frogs near by... lol..enjoyed..Linda
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Date: 6/24/2014 4:53:00 PM
Yea they can get on your nerves,,,Just take a deep breath and enjoy their beauty...wonderful Sara
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Date: 6/24/2014 4:26:00 PM
Lol, they are singing cheerios with you, Sara! Give them leave, haha
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Date: 6/24/2014 4:17:00 PM
H, Sara. Sounds like once they echoed your excitement than you were much happier. I like the way you crafted this one, it flowed very well.... Robert.
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Date: 6/24/2014 3:25:00 PM
i bet they were super excited about that rain. This was a really cute one, and I liked how your annoyance changed to acceptance of their noise.
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