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The native American and the paleface
Each claiming ownership over the place
For three hundred years they’d been fighting the fight
But peace would be parleyed later that night

Senators; soldiers; a chieftain or two
Agreed to talk peace by a moon that was new
Privates stood guard ’gainst rebellious gun
In the Comanche camp at the down of the sun

My orders were only to tend the camp fire
There would be no talking if it should expire
No parley, no peace-pipe, no fun and no frolic
It seemed that the fire was somehow symbolic

Alas I slipped up and the fire went out
I looked for more wood, there was nothing about
I stared at those grey lifeless ashes, agog
But then I laid eyes on that one massive log

Well I had been schooled but I didn’t learn
If - smothered with paint - wood can still burn
It’s something I really knew little about
But did know of only one way to find out

I chopped it and sawed it and relit the fire
I’d managed to stave off the Comanche’s ire
I felt pretty smug having just saved the day
And smiled as the Comanche chief came my way

Paleface, he said, you watch ancestral flame
It is, like our Totem Pole... sacred the same
To Comanche, fire is the heart and the soul
Well I had to ask... Totem pole???

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/5/2021 3:15:00 AM
Ooops! I appreciate a good laugh, and this definitely made me laugh!
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/5/2021 5:12:00 AM
I’m glad you put oops with a capital O. Thanks BJ. Terry
Date: 6/30/2021 4:36:00 PM
thanks for the giggle Terry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2021 5:23:00 PM
Thankyou Jan. Terry
Date: 6/29/2021 6:27:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha! Wonderful, Terry. I have to ask to: Perhaps -- Tote 'em, Pole! (Or would you rather have a Russki?!). :)
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Terry Flood
Date: 6/30/2021 3:34:00 AM
Thanks Gershon. Nothing to tote... it’s all ashes now. Terry
Date: 6/29/2021 3:52:00 PM
Great story, Terry! The ending made me chuckle! Blessings, Kim M
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Terry Flood
Date: 6/29/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thanks Kim. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 6/29/2021 1:52:00 PM
Hahahaha... uh-oh... Love the story
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Terry Flood
Date: 6/29/2021 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Been struggling with this one, wasn’t sure it worked. Gave it some effort today and decided it was time for its metaphorical full stop. So I’m glad you liked it. Terry
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