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The native American and the paleface Each claiming ownership over the place For three hundred years they’d been fighting the fight But peace would be parleyed later that night Senators; soldiers; a chieftain or two Agreed to talk peace by a moon that was new Privates stood guard ’gainst rebellious gun In the Comanche camp at the down of the sun My orders were only to tend the camp fire There would be no talking if it should expire No parley, no peace-pipe, no fun and no frolic It seemed that the fire was somehow symbolic Alas I slipped up and the fire went out I looked for more wood, there was nothing about I stared at those grey lifeless ashes, agog But then I laid eyes on that one massive log Well I had been schooled but I didn’t learn If - smothered with paint - wood can still burn It’s something I really knew little about But did know of only one way to find out I chopped it and sawed it and relit the fire I’d managed to stave off the Comanche’s ire I felt pretty smug having just saved the day And smiled as the Comanche chief came my way Paleface, he said, you watch ancestral flame It is, like our Totem Pole... sacred the same To Comanche, fire is the heart and the soul Well I had to ask... Totem pole???

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Date: 7/5/2021 3:15:00 AM
Ooops! I appreciate a good laugh, and this definitely made me laugh!
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Terry Flood
Date: 7/5/2021 5:12:00 AM
I’m glad you put oops with a capital O. Thanks BJ. Terry
Date: 6/30/2021 4:36:00 PM
thanks for the giggle Terry:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/30/2021 5:23:00 PM
Thankyou Jan. Terry
Date: 6/29/2021 6:27:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha! Wonderful, Terry. I have to ask to: Perhaps -- Tote 'em, Pole! (Or would you rather have a Russki?!). :)
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Terry Flood
Date: 6/30/2021 3:34:00 AM
Thanks Gershon. Nothing to tote... it’s all ashes now. Terry
Date: 6/29/2021 3:52:00 PM
Great story, Terry! The ending made me chuckle! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/29/2021 3:56:00 PM
Thanks Kim. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 6/29/2021 1:52:00 PM
Hahahaha... uh-oh... Love the story
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Date: 6/29/2021 1:58:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Been struggling with this one, wasn’t sure it worked. Gave it some effort today and decided it was time for its metaphorical full stop. So I’m glad you liked it. Terry

Book: Shattered Sighs