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Poppy Fields

awash in crimson colour and smell permeate intoxicating

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Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 12/5/2012 12:00:00 AM

Wow wow and again wow! Can I post it to my short poetry blog fryktorein.blogspot.gr, please?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 5:23:00 PM

Frank, wow..with the image and smell... love the haiku... ~LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/4/2012 3:45:00 PM

what is awash in crimson? OHhh the poppy's you are using the title as an extra line..that's why they don't have title so you will get your image in 17 syllables or less..you gave yourself 20 syllables [the scent poppies/intoxicates the hikers-- the pinic begins] no period is needed or capitaliztion [this isn't a complete sentence for one thing.] Hope that was of some help try another? Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2012 3:28:00 PM

great sensory haiku!