Poor Sod

i have been called a sod, by a sometimes girlfriend, she knew how to make 4 purple throb, the vacumn was transcending, subtle sweet explosive rite, me little knees did tremble, orright.... Don

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Russell Sivey

Date: 7/17/2012 11:20:00 AM

This is a wonderfully expressive write, what else have you been called my friend? I'm sure we could come up with quite a list of things that we both been called over the years, no? Anyway, this is a grandiose poem Don, I really enjoyed this creative piece! Great Work!!

David Williams

Date: 7/17/2012 2:31:00 AM

Don, that's tame to some of the things i've been called, I like it...Dave