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Pirates Booty

I’m going to sea in a blueberry boat my only concern is…..if it will float down the quick stream ……into the moat The sea is skim milk….don’t ask me why a cheerio sun hangs high in the sky and rock dwelling Skittles can’t fly…..but they try. That tyrannical pirate….the Captain of Crunch uses sugar and honey to urge his wild bunch to stay in their seats…..raging seas afore lunch. Thus with a slurping…… an eddying gulp in the maw of a monster…..chewed to a pulp I flow with the surge heading straight to the gulf. ©9.13/2019 Welcome to my random world Poetry Contest Nina Parmenter sponsor

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Date: 9/22/2019 9:49:00 AM
such a fun poem John, many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2019 1:51:00 AM
G'day John … a really fun write that I reckon kids would be intrigued reading your verse - thank you John - Lindsay
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Date: 9/14/2019 6:16:00 PM
Perfectly written! And I'm sure Nina will love it too! Such a fun write I bet the grandson loves it!;)
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Date: 9/13/2019 9:24:00 PM
This is perfect and I'm sure it will do well. I loved it. God bless you
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Date: 9/13/2019 7:55:00 PM
Down the gulf...Nice one
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Date: 9/13/2019 3:38:00 PM
Really fun John. I especially liked the line about the Cheerio sun, that was very clever and I love the picture that instantly flashed in my mind when I read it. Best wishes in the contest
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