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pampas grass stirs whirls dances... tinkling sound dog hugs,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 3/26/2012 5:43:00 PM
Hi Sara yes traditional haiku is about nature but the verse Sucker was mean to be an example of western/ comtemporary/ modern haiku which does not have to be about nature and can include man..I prefer the traditional form. Your haiku, though about nature, still qualifies as western etc. because you used personification & punctuation though ..I am not sure what dogs hugs refers to? or why a comma was necessary? Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/26/2012 6:21:00 PM
LOL I thought maybe it was a new trend? Hey it's only a comma hal;f the time I have on two differnt shoes! [I have two pairs of the same same shoes one brown & one black!]
Date: 3/26/2012 8:39:00 AM
I think I've read all your new poems now, so I thought I'd enjoy this one again - it reminds me of walks with my gran : )
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Date: 3/23/2012 1:16:00 PM
Lovely image of the grass dancing. thank you for sharing this haiku.
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Date: 3/23/2012 11:22:00 AM
love the mental picture I get from this one, Sara : )
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