One Day If I Could Spend the Night

One day, perhaps if I could spend the night, 
I would stack your hearth with firewood, 
and we would sit together on your couch, 
you, your feet tucked under you, 
your head against my chest, 
while I would hold you close 
and breathe that faint and lovely fragrance of your hair.
And we could dine on pizza and red wine, 
in the softly glowing firelight. 
One day, perhaps, if I could spend the night. 

One day, perhaps if I could spend the night, 
there would be no haste, 
no urgency in either of our lives, 
and we could have another glass of wine, 
while speaking soberly 
of matters sombre, 
if we felt that way inclined. 
Or, 
we would have that other glass of wine and laugh at matters impolite. 
One day, perhaps, if I could spend the night. 

One day, perhaps if I could spend the night, 
when we were ready we would go to bed 
and kiss 
and make unhurried love. 
Or, 
equally unhurried, we would not. 
And we would listen to the wind and rain 
and kiss and make unhurried love again. 
Or,
equally unhurried, we would not. 
Then we would sleep, 
egg and spoon together. 
With each of us at peace. 
And everything, in both our worlds, would be just right. 
One day, 
perhaps, 
if I could spend the night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 5:19 PM
I decided since you have only that one page of poetry, I am better just to start at the bottom and work my way up. I have probably seen almost half your poetry already and the first five you posted here by now I think.
Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 5:17 PM
Well, Red, for a tawdry poetry loving guy, you sure do come up with some awesome sensitive poems about women. this is exactly the kind of poem that I like to see a man write. It shows such caring for the other person!
Honeytip Avatar
April 3, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Still does me in.....just checking ;-) xxxxxx
Hendricks Avatar
March 29, 2013 at 1:41 PM
I love your straight-from-the-heart writing. May your wish come true, Red. Nothing is cast in stone. I'm Redding for you :)
Honeytip Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 3:10 AM
This is my favourite poem of yours....it always has been. Beautiful....from your gorgeous heart. I will be here every day to read it again....I won't comment every day tho...you might get scared of me hehehehe xxx
A   Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 8:52 AM
love the image of a heart stacked of fire wood... keeps the fiery image going... Red, hope you get that one day of peaceful passion..LINDA
Honeytip Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 4:07 AM
Now....this is writing of the type we mere mortals can only aspire to. Heartfelt, warm, honest and beautiful. This is so special <3
O'Leary Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Enjoyed... very nice... Terry
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