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On Killing Poetry

          On Killing Poetry How truly small can we create a poem? Small as a button or a well-worn stone? Is is technocracy or at we in a hurry? That drives us to such dire, poetic perfidy? Perhaps one of only periods and commas? We'd all comment, "oh such fantastic, sensitive drama!" Full use of English,or Francais to name but a few. We avoid them like a disease, or am I off cue? I don't know if it's the desire to win a trophy or what? It just seems killing the language , is the meanest, poetic cut!                             August 16, 2020               6am PST

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Date: 8/18/2020 7:15:00 AM
Hi Pangie, now this is a serious write. Why do we write poetry? There are so many answers to this question. I write, long, boring poetry. I know that people do not like this kind of poetry but it is me. Poetry must always come from the heart and the soul. This kind of poetry seems to sing in the mind. There seems to be too many rules in poetry these days. I actualy saw a poem with only periods and commas, fullstops and question marks and as you say, it was lauded to the Heavens. Mike. XX
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/18/2020 8:51:00 AM
This question riles some poets.I have no doubt you saw what you did. Imagine if you will, a love song with only three words! I understand minimalist poetry is "in. "The problem I have is I don't understand some of it. There seems to be a school of thought that any words on paper, with you or I declaring ourselves as poets, automatically makes us poets. I see no win in this. I can declare myself an Olympic Skater, too. But cannot skate. Poetry currently is anything?? How about Poetry only made of Emojis? LOL. Everyone's a Poet now. Maybe one day there will be standards. For now? None.))) Pangie xx
Date: 8/17/2020 2:43:00 AM
Poetry comes from the heart, if you follow that I think you're on the right path, who says we have to follow rules, we bend it and shape it anyway we want. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2020 8:41:00 AM
Appreciate your P.O.V! Pangiexx
Date: 8/16/2020 2:24:00 PM
?? ... ! :)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2020 8:31:00 AM
Gershon gets the Olympic Gold on his Perfect answer. You caught the sarcasm in my poem.Can we for heavens sake stop promoting minimal lines....no....)))) . We write like texters ,not Poets. I am awful ant text-Poetry. Just stumbling along. Pangie.
Date: 8/16/2020 11:52:00 AM
Lovely write! Quite right too in your assessment of what passes as poetry sometimes! Write for the purity of it, to let the music in your soul out, to craft words that travel to another heart and mind!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2020 8:23:00 AM
Krish... Throwing words on paper does not a poet make! There is an art to it , like sculpture. I like the ones with heart and soul. We probably all have different viewpoints. Words, for words sake? Any of us can use a thesaurus and impress others. It Goes right past me. )))) thanks Krish. Pangiexx
Date: 8/16/2020 10:56:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I think we write poetry because it is in our blood.Some do it for trophies Some just to write. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/18/2020 12:37:00 PM
Hello Panagiotw, I do not eat much in the heat either. Oh- Eddie is in school! Good that they practice safety. When you are ready to be on the soup Mail- you will be. norush. hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2020 10:50:00 AM
Darleme..all ok here with all of us. Eddie in school.They practice safety but nothing imsane. Have not been in my soup mail amd won't be for awhile. Hungry today..good lunch is big..don't want to eat when it's hoy. Hope all OK in Canada Pangie xx Pangie
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/17/2020 10:11:00 AM
Hello Panagiota,I hpe all is well with you .Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/17/2020 8:17:00 AM
I agree, Darlene. Pangie xx

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