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Oh Moon

U look so magnificent & blissfull.. Folks from different lands admire U oh moon , oh moon U have been the symbol of love U act as an ailing branch of connection between two dispatched hearts.. U convey the untold message of love so easily & make peace between the lovers.. U have been the symbol of hope, gratitude since the past. oh moon , oh moon U make the dark,dreadful nights so charming & beautiful... U make it so compassionate & loveable. U have been withnessing the heroic stories of love & war U stood like an rise of hope, with the broken hearts , when no one seemed to care for them.. oh moon ,oh moon U do me a favour...as U have been conveying the love of others.... U please do convey my immense love to my prince on a white horse..!! Will u do it?? oh moon ,oh moon

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Date: 7/8/2017 9:21:00 AM
This is absloutly awesome. I love you're tribute to the moon. I love the way you give credit for all its wonders and all it's romance. There is an old song "les coeurs jumeaux" by concrete blonde. I believe your song is its kindred spirit. Execellent work!
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Date: 4/8/2017 7:12:00 AM
I love my prince on a white horse too. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Alina Samreen
Date: 4/9/2017 12:58:00 AM
Thank you. ;)
Date: 4/7/2017 4:55:00 PM
I like your line "U make the dark, dreadful nights so charming and beautiful..." Welcome to the soup!
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Alina Samreen
Date: 4/9/2017 12:58:00 AM
Thank you.

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