Obsidian

Black Obsidian, its hypnotic dark beauty will carve out your heart.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/3/2023 11:42:00 AM

Dark, ominous, magnetic beauty, Terry. Enjoyed. Blessings.

Terry Miller
Date: 8/4/2023 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Sam

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/29/2023 2:29:00 AM

A very powerful haiku on Obsidian. Congratulations!

Terry Miller
Date: 8/4/2023 7:23:00 AM

Thank you so much

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/28/2023 7:12:00 PM

Nicely done, Terry! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Terry Miller
Date: 8/4/2023 7:28:00 AM

Thank you Kim

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/28/2023 8:37:00 AM

A new word for me. I have now researched it and fallen in love with obsidian.. Thank you Terry, its beauty is unmistakable and the legends it carries are depicted so well in your remarkable Haiku. Well done. Best wishes from SV

Terry Miller
Date: 8/4/2023 7:30:00 AM

Hey SV, thank you I am fascinated with obsidian too. Sharper than steel which is in part why the South Americans did not move on to metal weapons, they did not have to.