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O, The Things You Will See

O, the things you will see If you come home with me The doorbell don’t ring the cat is puking Every carpet is worn the curtains all torn In the fridge there’s an odor beside which there’s no motor The toilet’s a tad moldy It’s no goody, just an oldie Please don’t choke on the dust Pray there’s no wind gust And wait ‘til you see what’s on the next floor What? You’re leaving? Don’t wanna see any more?

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Date: 3/30/2025 6:46:00 AM
Other than that there's no place like home.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2025 7:37:00 PM
True enough.
Date: 3/28/2025 7:38:00 PM
How neighborly…lol!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2025 7:38:00 PM
Just like a good neighbor, my farm is there! ~ S. Tate Lee
Date: 3/28/2025 5:49:00 PM
LOL. No wonder you have so much time to write over 3,000 poems!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2025 7:42:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. Better a fresh poem than a moldy toilet, I always say... Comment of the Week so far, Oliver.
Date: 3/28/2025 3:25:00 AM
Ha ha ha. At least you have a house Gershon my brother would love to trade places with you. lol. Thank you for the laugh have a great weekend...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2025 7:43:00 PM
Are you calling my place a house?! How dare you? lol. ~ gw
Date: 3/27/2025 9:56:00 PM
lol...I met thuh fella in mine tramps, just az you describe..even in art, I walk'd away...loved the write...much love
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/30/2025 7:44:00 PM
Pleased to meet you, James! :) gw

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