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Nude Under the Stars

Seduced by night’s spell Nude under the stars she laid, Eclipsed was the moon! © Demetrios Trifiatis 05 MARCH 2015

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Date: 5/26/2015 5:55:00 AM
wow...beautiful and sensual imagery here! Lovely 'ku. Good morning, sire. Glad to see your smiling face today.
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Date: 4/1/2015 7:55:00 AM
Very erotic in a beautiful classic frame of humility!
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Date: 3/12/2015 7:23:00 PM
very nicely done! I live in the country....nude stargazing is refreshing! Willow :)
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Date: 3/13/2015 1:33:00 AM
May I conclude that an...eclipse of the moon is not a rare phenomenon in your part of the world? Ha-ha! Welcome dear, Willow and thank you for your lovely comment and visit!
Date: 3/11/2015 9:28:00 PM
My mind is conjuring up the vision of this truly seductive scene! Very sensual! Cheers, your Montreal friend!
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Date: 3/12/2015 8:39:00 AM
Keeping your promise, what a delight, dear Jack! Thank you!
Date: 3/7/2015 10:59:00 AM
Tastefully sensual.
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Date: 3/7/2015 12:56:00 PM
One has to be very careful not to surpass the aesthetic, dear Richard! Thank you my friend!
Date: 3/7/2015 9:25:00 AM
beautifully seductive words Demetrios - :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2015 12:57:00 PM
My wished to glorify God's "improved" creation, dear Jan! Thank you very much for visiting and commenting!
Date: 3/7/2015 8:46:00 AM
great haiku--top-notch.Love and respect >>>rajat
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Date: 3/7/2015 12:59:00 PM
Your comment my friend, Rajat, is much appreciated! Thank you!
Date: 3/7/2015 6:13:00 AM
Now this is an excellent haiku :.)
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Date: 3/7/2015 1:00:00 PM
Happy am I that you dear, Charmaine, think that it is! Thank you!
Date: 3/6/2015 2:23:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, dear friend
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Date: 3/7/2015 1:01:00 PM
My dear, Eve, thank you for your gracious comment!
Date: 3/6/2015 7:51:00 AM
A lunar eclipse by one of God's greatest creation -- woman!! Lovely my dear friend. a top rating as always.
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Date: 3/6/2015 11:16:00 AM
We in agreement my friend, David! Thank you for your precious commen.
Date: 3/5/2015 1:10:00 PM
tremendous impact this ku evokes, D.. wow.. huggs
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:06:00 AM
Your comment has the same impact my dear, nette, thank you so much for your visit!
Date: 3/5/2015 12:34:00 PM
- Beautiful, my friend Demetrios ! - ..... It must be in a hot country, not in Norway :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/6/2015 7:08:00 AM
Yes, for this time of the year only here she could do it, dear Anne-Lise! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting!
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