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trees, leaves sprawled underneath, sway bare branches. birds embark on plight of sad farewell, dewdrops glisten in misty mornings, frisky squirrels scurry in haste, holding prized possessions in tight grip! November 7, 2022 "November Nonet" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich syllables checked by HMS.com Edited Punctuation on November 23, 2022

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2022 4:10:00 PM

Mala I loved your imagery. If you had used punctuation marks, I'd have put this at second place. I am a real stickler for showing line breaks with periods and commas. Anyway, LOVED this, and congrats for podium win.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/21/2022 4:28:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Actually I am very fussy about punctuation too - somehow I had the idea that Nonet doesn’t require punctuation like haiku. I was obviously mistaken. Love ~ Mala

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/15/2022 3:56:00 AM

Such a wonderous writing. I love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/26/2022 4:10:00 PM

Thank you, Gina. Your kind comment inspired me.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/9/2022 1:38:00 AM

How lovely and cute this Nonet is, Mala! I love the imagery and the feelings which you ignite within me. ~ Best regards, my friend // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/9/2022 6:44:00 AM

Thanks, Paul, for your delightful visit. Encouraging words from a kind friend, and a talented poet like you, inspire me.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2022 2:27:00 AM

Aren't those squirrels amazing. Great entry to Andrea's contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/7/2022 6:29:00 PM

Your words are better than any picture.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/7/2022 6:50:00 PM

Thank you. I feel honoured.