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trees, leaves sprawled underneath, sway bare branches. birds embark on plight of sad farewell, dewdrops glisten in misty mornings, frisky squirrels scurry in haste, holding prized possessions in tight grip! November 7, 2022 "November Nonet" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich syllables checked by HMS.com Edited Punctuation on November 23, 2022

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Date: 11/21/2022 4:10:00 PM
Mala I loved your imagery. If you had used punctuation marks, I'd have put this at second place. I am a real stickler for showing line breaks with periods and commas. Anyway, LOVED this, and congrats for podium win.
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Date: 11/21/2022 4:28:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Actually I am very fussy about punctuation too - somehow I had the idea that Nonet doesn’t require punctuation like haiku. I was obviously mistaken. Love ~ Mala
Date: 11/15/2022 3:56:00 AM
Such a wonderous writing. I love it. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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Date: 11/26/2022 4:10:00 PM
Thank you, Gina. Your kind comment inspired me.
Date: 11/9/2022 1:38:00 AM
How lovely and cute this Nonet is, Mala! I love the imagery and the feelings which you ignite within me. ~ Best regards, my friend // paul
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Date: 11/9/2022 6:44:00 AM
Thanks, Paul, for your delightful visit. Encouraging words from a kind friend, and a talented poet like you, inspire me.
Date: 11/8/2022 2:27:00 AM
Aren't those squirrels amazing. Great entry to Andrea's contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/7/2022 6:29:00 PM
Your words are better than any picture.
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Date: 11/7/2022 6:50:00 PM
Thank you. I feel honoured.

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