Nate- When a Baby Dies

Torrential rain  

stabs at the ground as

I stand here still wearing shock 

like a soldier in

war torn uniform

So recent was


the surgery that


removed

your lifeless body from mine

leaving me newly

without you

My wound fresh


my mind dazed

from blood soaking battle

I hear the Rabbi speaking

and see your

little

pine

coffin

as it is lowered

into the dirt

I know

so 

well

your soul

that left

and

your

body

within it 

wearing a tiny shirt

an embroidered teddy bear 

sewn on the front

I dig the silver shovel

into the earth and lift

it toward 

your resting place
 
I toss 

the cold

damp

earth

gently

and as it lands

I lean forward

for a last 

sight of you

though you can never again be seen

and suddenly my

words of my love of you

become louder than the

deafening rain,

my silence shattered 

by my tormented

shout

beneath our 

green tented covering 

flapping in the wind

under the

sobbing skies 

Nate; Poetry by
Susan M. Walker, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/23/2015 10:38:00 PM
Hi Susan, I've read that about 4 times, provokes ponder. A gripping poem. Look forward to reading more Regards, Craig
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Date: 12/24/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thank you, Craig. What's most meaningful to us is what gives life to our poetry, I believe. I really appreciate your thoughts about this, my most precious poem to me.
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