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My Questions This Day

My Questions This Day What are we doing with our patriotism? Are we taking freedoms for granted? Do we recognize subtle shifts in powers? Will we ever, again, be able to fearlessly choose? Or are we now over regulated individuals? Are we subservient to politics? Economic servants to the government… Are we no longer free to go on about choosing? Enduring the business of living…are we submissive? Do political entities regulate us beyond freedom? Do our laws serve the desires of the servers? And what about the people? Do we serve God? This nation was founded on religious freedoms. Are those freedoms being infiltrated? Will forced beliefs deny our freedoms to worship? Or will we someday have oppressions to forebear? Will we find, too late, a grave sorrow? Sorrows for not better watching and defending— Sorrows for focusing on getting instead of giving— Sorrows for letting tyranny creep in undetected— Our forefather’s gift, freedom, cost men their lives. Our forefather’s fought for, won, and defended. Our forefather’s fight for freedom was honorable. Filled dreams and uplifted hearts were heaven sent. We are their predecessors and must carry on. Respect their winning by protecting our freedoms. Defend liberty with the utmost care and endurance. Wars resulting from greed and jealousy are ungodly. Destruction of people and nations follows evils. Wars devoid of peaceful goals devastate eternity. Love God, live right, give love, and prepare souls. Free agency of the individual is an eternal quest. It is an everlasting test…how will you choose? Ponder and pray? Choose the right with opened eyes? Protect? Defend? Forbear? Endure? Ponder. Friends. Those are my questions. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 20, 2010 Poetic form: Narrative

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Date: 2/21/2010 6:29:00 AM
Happy Sunday Dane Ann.. just posted Prophecy ..another End Line Word poem for u to add to your list ... luv.. and blessings today and always.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/20/2010 11:17:00 PM
When there is oppression sure there is a liberator, this is the world we are living, surviving to limit some of our freedom and giving in to the manmade system that is not perfect. Luckily, mankind still have one way to depend on and that is the fear that is there is God. All our questions could be redirected to Him as He has the answer to all of this. Thank you for commenting my end line word, please read also "An Attempt" which did not go to your database of end line word. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/20/2010 8:51:00 PM
And very valid questions indeed Dane, I ask myself many of the same through out the day but I always fall back to the belief on what America was founded upon a profound belief in the lord above and all around God. Also congrats on your found love and on yet another superb piece of writing that I enjoyed sharing =) Sang
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Date: 2/20/2010 10:56:00 AM
Hi, Dane Ann. How can there be any freedom left when we all are victims of the media...dramatization...big business advertising...dramatic music...everything a huge production! Hey! We're all programmed! You be a thinker. I like that mucho. BIG LOVE, daver
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:36:00 AM
Excellent write Dane Ann.. will make everyone who reads ..sit up and start seriously thinking... freedom is precious to all ... we should all strive to maintain it.. patriotism is always in my home especially as my youngest son is leaving March 1st for military duty in Iraq... so this poem is close to my heart... thankxxx for an awesome write from an awesome lady and poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/20/2010 5:46:00 AM
We must all look to our hearts for the answer to this question, fine write and good ask Daniel
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Date: 2/20/2010 4:18:00 AM
Good questions that you have proposed in this write. Keep the creative writes flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara
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