My Mental Moshpit

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Sudden snakes in my brain
what a waste are my inaudible cries
mental welts I give myself
because I made you leave
now you hate me
screw my life 
it's all just too hard to believe

Inaudibly I crumble and fall into the dirt
don't bury me,  just leave me here
dead inside, inert
I died the day you left me
I'd never felt so hurt

Hope in the shape of Zoloft
just doesn't do the trick
I read our chats over and over
and the flogging bud of failure
knowing how much I lost 
leaves me feeling sick

you said I was toxic maybe that's true
I only know 
I've never loved anyone the way I love you
my mental mosh pit, my hodgepodge mind
I feel so much, but I'll never say 
and the snakes in my brain 
will probably never go away

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