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My Little Dachshund

My little dachshund is such a pest, when I'm writing he just won't rest. He grabs the ball and comes sashaying in trying to gain my attentions solely on him. I resist at first, determined to continue writing but his persistence is quite inspiring. Once or twice is never enough, he's a little dog hidden in the rough. Before I throw the ball he is away standing, holding, waiting for the play. I raise my arm and point to left then to right but he knows this game and holds steady in spite. My little friend is wise beyond his years and there he goes running to my cheers. He returns with satisfaction, holding tight the ball knowing at some point Ill say "That's all." I can't resist that tiny face and in the yard we each take our place. We play our games, applauding each new feat then go inside for a special treat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/15/2021 8:41:00 PM
DM, Lucky to find this treasure today. Our family loves Dachshund dogs, and all their cute conniving ways. -Richard
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Dm Babbit
Date: 7/17/2021 10:13:00 AM
Snickers was just 9. I had my Aunt's mini Heidi, she was almost 18, these lili hotdogs are great companions, thanks for resurfacing an old memory. D
Date: 11/28/2015 11:17:00 AM
Aww DMB this is cute the imagery is lovely - I wrote a poem about a Dachshund for a contest - was a great theme to write about:-)
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/28/2015 11:24:00 AM
Aww Andrea has a dog called Snickers too - I have no pets but I do eat Snickers bars lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Dm Babbit
Date: 11/28/2015 11:21:00 AM
My Snickers i almost four but very loving. Thanks for stopping by. DMB

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