My Doll, My Dachshund

Dachshunds - Poetry Contest

My Doll, My Dachshund

An old abandoned house in the country, is where we saved our precious hound
Covered in mange, fleas, ticks and whatever deathly smell she had found
I called her name; from out of the yonder she came when she heard my yell
We could see she was excited to be rescued and the car ride went well
Once we arrived home, it was bath time, eating, then sleep
For hours she snuggled next to me without even a weep
She was red, small, a miniature seven year old baby of mine
We shared everything together and talked all the time
We would cuddle in blankets when weather was cold
No matter the circumstance, she and I fit the mold
One day she came to me, however not feeling right
I rushed her to the clinic and sat there all night
The doctor informed me that she could no longer walk
I sat there stunned, desperately crying, I couldn't talk
Our only option, as you can imagine, was true
I held her in my arms as she went into the sky blue
She is buried by the creek bed where she loved to play
There is not a moment that I don’t miss her every single day
Not knowing if I will ever feel the same way as I did then
Hoping that someday, her little nose will nudge me again

01-07-15 Dachshund poetry-soup contest
For sissy, you are missed my pet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/1/2015 5:38:00 PM
Thank you all for your comments and thank you for the win. I'm without a computer at the moment so it might be a while before I can post again. Be patient and don't give up on me. Thanks again to all. Kristin xx
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:40:00 PM
KRISTIN, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:36:00 PM
Such a beautiful tribute - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2015 1:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your emotive work..Great way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/26/2015 4:22:00 PM
What a beautiful write and so heartbreaking, Kristin. Congratulations on your win and a 7. Blessings dear friend eve
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