Mountains of Panama

There are some things you cannot rhyme
nor even manage to bespeak
If you happen to see among those 
this feeling leaves you weak

Yes they are among us in the broad of day
perched beside the mountain almost hidden away
One has to really look to determine if it's real
embedded deep within as nerves dost feel  

A feel, a stare, as one cannot believe 
If ever mentioned will be construed deceived
In that as you read your eyes may never view
Those from another world are affixed on you. 

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Many of us have seen space ships
some up close
but best to let things lie.........in the mountains...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/10/2011 12:30:00 AM
This is really something. Have you really seen something like this? God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/8/2011 5:48:00 PM
nicely penned Judy and very descriptive piece too.. good luck in the contest..I never saw a space ship other than Close Encounters of the Third Kind movie or The Day The Earth Stood Still..the old version.. now that was super.. good luck luv..
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Date: 8/8/2011 3:08:00 PM
and to allow things to stay and be... how gentle and fluid is your rhyme, judy... thrilled! :) huggs, nette
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