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Mother suffered most in the late night brawls. We peeped through cracks in timber walls. Plates smashed as in movies, with shouts galore. Us caught up in the frenzy we could not ignore. Mother suffered most at the hands of gin, whiskey and brandy, how could she win? Trying to smash bottles that had been hidden. Suffering drunken blows that came unbidden. Mother suffered most we can't deny, but we children carry scars from those days gone by. 26/02/2018

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Date: 4/28/2018 8:05:00 AM
This is lovely and incredible. Your pen overflow with creativity and wisdom. Wishing to read more of your works...
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Jean Murray
Date: 4/28/2018 8:39:00 AM
Fanum, so nice to see you again. I have slowed down a lot with what I produce. Perhaps because I am finally over my X husband. That, and my chronic lack of poetic confidence.
Date: 3/9/2018 12:20:00 PM
What a painful story in the form of such a tiny and nicely penned poem. Thanks for the sharing.
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Jean Murray
Date: 3/9/2018 12:35:00 PM
And thank you Subhas for taking the time to comment.
Date: 3/5/2018 5:34:00 PM
just read the note you left me about your brother. SO strange how some sweet people can turn ugly when drunk.
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Date: 2/27/2018 4:06:00 PM
Hi Jean , sad is the first word I think of, so many Mothers so many children , you describe with great emotion my friend ::) hugs
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/28/2018 10:28:00 AM
Hi Niall. When we siblings get together now, we marvel all the more at our neglect, and what well adjusted loving parents we have turned into.
Date: 2/27/2018 3:30:00 PM
This is very sad, especially if it's your own story, Jean. The father of my stepfather was very cruel when he got drunk. The few times i stayed the night at his house, I felt so sorry for his wife! WEll done with the theme!
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Date: 2/28/2018 4:09:00 AM
Funny you should say that Andrea. The only one of seven of us who occasionally will drink too much is our lonesome youngest brother. The nicest mild mannered person turns into someone looking for a brawl in a bar. Repressed rage I guess.
Date: 2/27/2018 3:30:00 PM
I see down here that you knew abuse. it's a horrible thing!!
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/28/2018 4:04:00 AM
Good morning Andrea. I wished that the deep emotional bruises could be visible somehow to the naked eye. To me, the pain was worse than physical. At least then I could have fought back, as my mother did.
Date: 2/27/2018 12:48:00 PM
- This poem describes true pain and emotions, well written Jean - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/27/2018 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine.
Date: 2/27/2018 12:51:00 AM
It is so difficult to live with this disease. I can relate Jean. Your poem is poignantly written with the message of how terribly it can affect our children. Excellent! A fave my friend! xxoo
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/27/2018 1:48:00 AM
Thank you Connnie.
Date: 2/26/2018 8:05:00 PM
Your poem bleeds the truth... and all I can say is how selfless that woman was...as much for him as for you... All the best Jean
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/27/2018 1:48:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. She was amazing.
Date: 2/26/2018 7:32:00 PM
so well written, jean! a very powerful poem with a great ending (sad that it is)...
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/27/2018 1:34:00 AM
Thank you Ilene.
Date: 2/26/2018 6:46:00 PM
Sadly I can relate to this piece. I'm sorry this is a part of your past. I hope you found a man worthy of your love and much different than your dad.
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/27/2018 1:33:00 AM
My Dad was physically abusive. My husband was emotionally abusive. I live in hope Richard.
Date: 2/26/2018 4:50:00 PM
So sad dearest. My father was that way but only once I witnessed the drunken fight.
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/27/2018 1:26:00 AM
It was sad Tim.
Date: 2/26/2018 4:22:00 PM
The ending you wrote got me the most, but the entire poem tugs the heart. Your simple words speak of reality for many.. so true..not just the mother but the entire family suffers. Excellent depiction, Jean!
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Jean Murray
Date: 2/27/2018 1:21:00 AM
Thank you Vijay and thankfully history did not repeat.

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