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morning crunch

morning crunch of porch
with temperature in the teens -
skater breaks through ice

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2024

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February 11, 2024 at 8:27 AM

I am so glad the part of winter where mornings are in the teens are over with for this winter. Burrrrr!

February 11, 2024 at 10:35 AM

Seems so! In the 6o’s here in Georgia!

January 24, 2024 at 5:30 AM

Whoa!! I am wondering if that skater had on skates or just regular shoes. I hope that skater is okay. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara K

February 11, 2024 at 10:36 AM

Quite the metaphor, eh?!

January 21, 2024 at 8:05 PM

And this poem is lovely, like all yours...

February 11, 2024 at 10:36 AM

You are so kind! Thanks for reading!

January 21, 2024 at 7:56 PM

Hey, check back with my poem, and see if you get it.

January 21, 2024 at 1:42 PM

great imagery Kim but the only crunch i like in the morning is my cereal lol:-)hugs Jan xx

February 11, 2024 at 10:36 AM

LOL!

January 20, 2024 at 8:32 PM

I can relate to Gershon. Captain Crunch. (Or crunch berries).:)

January 20, 2024 at 8:35 PM

LOL

January 18, 2024 at 8:39 PM

The mornings are definitely crunchy here in Ohio

January 18, 2024 at 9:46 PM

I bet!

January 18, 2024 at 7:53 PM

Sounds like the latest new cereal come along to try to replace me. ~ Kap'n Krunch

January 18, 2024 at 9:46 PM

You must be a fan of said Cereal!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 18, 2024 at 5:08 PM

Your clever words have created a dramatic winter scene, Kim. I can practically see my breath in the air!

January 18, 2024 at 7:01 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

January 18, 2024 at 12:29 PM

Oh that means it is not cold enough? Freezing over here..

January 18, 2024 at 1:29 PM

Plenty cold for Georgia!

January 18, 2024 at 9:53 AM

Dear Kim, your Haiku is amazing. Sensory imagery and stunning last line. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

January 18, 2024 at 9:54 AM

Thank you, Susan!

Richard Lamoureux

January 18, 2024 at 5:37 AM

Sounds dangerous. I think I will stick with Captain Crunch in the morning.

January 18, 2024 at 9:53 AM

Sounds safe enough…ahoy!

Victor Buhagiar

January 18, 2024 at 2:12 AM

How well you compose these short poems. Hugs.

January 18, 2024 at 4:32 AM

I appreciate you, my friend xx

Jessica Renee Dawson

January 17, 2024 at 11:01 PM

Oh, my goodness! This is a riveting haiku and my heart started racing with the element of surprise.

January 18, 2024 at 4:33 AM

Ooh, thank you so much!

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