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morning crunch

morning crunch of porch with temperature in the teens - skater breaks through ice

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 2/11/2024 8:27:00 AM

I am so glad the part of winter where mornings are in the teens are over with for this winter. Burrrrr!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2024 10:35:00 AM

Seems so! In the 6o’s here in Georgia!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2024 5:30:00 AM

Whoa!! I am wondering if that skater had on skates or just regular shoes. I hope that skater is okay. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2024 10:36:00 AM

Quite the metaphor, eh?!

Paige Hind

Date: 1/21/2024 8:05:00 PM

And this poem is lovely, like all yours...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2024 10:36:00 AM

You are so kind! Thanks for reading!

Paige Hind

Date: 1/21/2024 7:56:00 PM

Hey, check back with my poem, and see if you get it.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/21/2024 1:42:00 PM

great imagery Kim but the only crunch i like in the morning is my cereal lol:-)hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/11/2024 10:36:00 AM

LOL!

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/20/2024 8:32:00 PM

I can relate to Gershon. Captain Crunch. (Or crunch berries).:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/20/2024 8:35:00 PM

LOL

Karen Croft

Date: 1/18/2024 8:39:00 PM

The mornings are definitely crunchy here in Ohio

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2024 9:46:00 PM

I bet!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/18/2024 7:53:00 PM

Sounds like the latest new cereal come along to try to replace me. ~ Kap'n Krunch

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2024 9:46:00 PM

You must be a fan of said Cereal!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/18/2024 5:08:00 PM

Your clever words have created a dramatic winter scene, Kim. I can practically see my breath in the air!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2024 7:01:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/18/2024 3:51:00 PM

oh no....where's the rock salt for the front porch. We rarely have occasion for it, but earlier in the week we had to salt down our porch so we could leave. Liked the titled. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2024 7:04:00 PM

Wasn’t icy but crackled like ice. Hope your evening has been pleasant too :)