Me Wan See

Oh, the wonders of China
   Far different than those of Carolina.
   "Me Wan See", I say to you
   Land of the Orient, so vast and true.
   Wonders that that land must hold
   Are now for the brave and for the bold.

   From Beijing to Guonghzou to Shanghai town
   Things to see, places to "get down".
   The foods so rich with a different flair
   Their sweet aromas fill the air.
   So many other things to do
   See the Great Wall, Xian, and Lhassa, too.

   Visit the tomb of Sun Yet Sen
   A father figure to his countrymen.
   Land so big, so beautiful, and treasures stored
   The land from which came the Mongol horde.
   Its history is long respected and replete
   With names given to both victory and defeat.

   Like Kublai Khan, Ghengis Khan, Attila the Hun
   Warriors all ... second to none.
   There were poets, artists, and philosophers too
   Which made the West pay attention anew.
   From the earliest contacts o'er land and sea,
   To the wondrous excitement Marco Polo brought back to Italy.

   The tea trade, jasmine, ginger, and precious jade 
   Ships and men risked lives for their fortunes to be made.
   "Me Do See" once so long ago
   Life has changed there ... this I know.
   With population at a billion and growing yet 
   I remember the bicycles ... who could forget?

   I understand scooters are now the mode
   For transport to and from one's abode.
   "Oh See How" I want to know
   Oriental wonders with temples aglow.
   The biggest change is in their attitude toward the world
   A chance for its people, its mysteries unfurled.

   "One Can Do" if there be time
   To even sit and write a rhyme.
   For China is a different place
   Different customs, culture, and different race.
   "Now I Say" to all of you
   It's more than the land, but the people too.

   They are taking a place on the world stage
   History only their success will gauge.  
   They have problems as all people do
   With the ability to work themselves out of them, too.
   "I Wan See" this land again
   Though I be an American.

   I had a Mother-in-Law who came from there
   A gentle woman, who would always care.
   It was her culture that taught her this
   Not the greed that engulfs so many of us.
   "Like See Soon" would be my request
   My time may be short, little to invest.

   So I have written about this land far away
   Remembering in verse in my own special way.
   I hope that I have also given you a key
   So  that someday you may want to say, "Me Wan See".  

   China

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/6/2010 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations Daniel on your win in Deborah Guzzy's contest "Somewhere Over the Rainbow". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2010 7:08:00 PM
Congrats on the sixth place win, Daniel
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Date: 8/4/2010 3:26:00 PM
Daniel, China is another awesome country and you express its beauty and intrigue extremely well in your winning poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Wonderfully creative. Congratulations! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:46:00 AM
Congrats Dan on your super win in Debbie's contest with this awesome piece.. a wonderful write and now enjoy a special win for this creative poem.. with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 5:50:00 AM
What an interesting perspective on visiting China! Congrads on your win! Go show Mom! Light & Love
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Date: 8/3/2010 9:21:00 AM
I enjoyed reading you,Daniel!Celene!
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Date: 8/1/2010 8:20:00 PM
awesome write,, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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Date: 8/1/2010 6:29:00 PM
enjoyed reading this piece today, china would be neat to see.
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Date: 8/1/2010 2:16:00 PM
absolutely wonderful, boy you are getting sone stiff competition though..fret...I have no suggestions or corrections LOL..how about that! smooch!Thanks for the memories I have a half dozen verse in here on my trip to China have you read them?
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