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Marzipan

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Inspired by an old haiku of mine.

Honey ... you Sweet on my tongue Licorice and almond eyes Dark hellos, darker goodbyes Begetter of my sugar rush Such corporeal candy crush Thighs and sighs to heaven's hush Lush, to wonder just how deep Oh so slowly, tenderly Love me fast to sleep Hard sin, saccharine Very confectionery ... My Marzipan. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Metaphor Of Love" Poetry Contest, Bobby May, Judge & Sponsor.

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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/13/2019 6:27:00 AM
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Delicious. Congrats on your top win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 2:05:00 PM
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Many kind thanks to you, Line - blessings! :o) <3
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/13/2019 4:47:00 AM
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- Sounds very sweet - Congratulations on your 1st place, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 2:04:00 PM
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Thanks, Anne-Lise, your kind words are appreciated, as always, my friend. Blessings! :o) <3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/12/2019 7:10:00 PM
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well penned....congrats on your win Greg :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 2:04:00 PM
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That's very kind of you, Sandra, I so greatly appreciate the wonderful comments! :o) <3
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/12/2019 6:58:00 PM
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Gregory great win congrats!;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 2:03:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Brenda - blessings! :o) <3
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Bobby May
Date: 11/12/2019 6:34:00 PM
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Congratulation on your Win! Gregory great job!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 2:02:00 PM
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Thank you so very much, Bobby - it is greatly appreciated! :o)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/12/2019 11:39:00 AM
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Delicious, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 2:01:00 PM
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Thank you, Line! :o)
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Laura Naville
Date: 11/12/2019 6:49:00 AM
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My favorite secret treat - soo naughty! Your words mean I can taste it - so keeping this poem close by for free calories!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 2:01:00 PM
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LOL - thank you so much, Laura, what a yummy and sweet comment - I so greatly appreciate the kind words, my friend! :o) <3

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